tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post8159569058069381147..comments2022-03-04T16:03:37.047-08:00Comments on One Shots: In heat (A kiba Lemon)naruangirl16http://www.blogger.com/profile/00135357780989331886noreply@blogger.comBlogger54125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-27676367696335082712019-03-20T17:20:13.014-07:002019-03-20T17:20:13.014-07:00I made the mistake of not reading the warnings. It...I made the mistake of not reading the warnings. It was good but I agree I cant see Kiba raping anyone.Kayla KittyKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467392704639301469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-15406075320941313322015-03-03T00:15:52.412-08:002015-03-03T00:15:52.412-08:00I'm not a fan of rape stories so I didn't ...I'm not a fan of rape stories so I didn't enjoy this. I guess I should have read the disclaimer :/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-28639968196777508122014-12-08T01:08:46.285-08:002014-12-08T01:08:46.285-08:00I agree about the grammar and spelling issues. Ver...I agree about the grammar and spelling issues. Very difficult to read through. You have a good plot, and some nice descriptions. But at some points it seemed there were entire words missing. I think you have some promising skills, and I suggest maybe a bit more editing. And it is always helpful to have a beta. Try finding someone that has a lot of writing experience in a similar genre. I did like the emotions you included. All in all, it is not a bad fic. There are plenty out there that I won't go past the first couple sentences as they could be better if done by a third grader >_< I hope I'm not coming off as mean, because I know how it felt when some of my first stories were cruelly shredded, and I know I can come off a little...rude? (To put it nicely >_>) But I don't mean to. But I've always appreciated the constructive criticism. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-33371108909432365572014-09-05T17:37:08.593-07:002014-09-05T17:37:08.593-07:00Since dogs go into heat, and the Inuzuka's are...Since dogs go into heat, and the Inuzuka's are like dogs in so many ways......its very possible the male Inuzuka's go into heat like dogs.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-27887347118208945042013-12-10T22:07:05.551-08:002013-12-10T22:07:05.551-08:00I couldn't finish it. To many grammatical and ...I couldn't finish it. To many grammatical and spelling errors. Sorry.Calla Nightshadenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-27676455031173127522013-05-10T16:26:37.324-07:002013-05-10T16:26:37.324-07:00-Troll voice- but everyone loves a troller! -Troll voice- but everyone loves a troller! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-48599280242096170262013-01-09T14:12:14.972-08:002013-01-09T14:12:14.972-08:00Love it plz write moreLove it plz write moreAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-64981293796267818872012-11-11T04:53:28.803-08:002012-11-11T04:53:28.803-08:00this would have to be one of the best detailed lem...this would have to be one of the best detailed lemons i've read. luv it! but poor aya!yuki-sanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05091395743204182032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-65519893962538926812012-10-14T16:42:26.215-07:002012-10-14T16:42:26.215-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16505568073464690607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-18830042190209181002012-10-14T16:40:55.370-07:002012-10-14T16:40:55.370-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16505568073464690607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-54330601700160410432012-09-13T19:11:49.043-07:002012-09-13T19:11:49.043-07:00I like rape lemons to so dont worry XDI like rape lemons to so dont worry XDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-24371509075540400462012-04-29T12:20:46.349-07:002012-04-29T12:20:46.349-07:00I love kiba and i have read most of your stories Y...I love kiba and i have read most of your stories You are my fav lemon writerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-51091371557443810832012-04-14T18:33:03.664-07:002012-04-14T18:33:03.664-07:00I SECOND THAT!!!!! <3I SECOND THAT!!!!! <3Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-80659516577283038932012-03-20T16:56:46.773-07:002012-03-20T16:56:46.773-07:00What the fuck? Why would you shout that to the wor...What the fuck? Why would you shout that to the world? Why would you do that to your boyfriend? WHYYYYYY?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-996845836318600842012-03-18T16:06:50.871-07:002012-03-18T16:06:50.871-07:00SOME guys go into heat,people. My cousin does,My b...SOME guys go into heat,people. My cousin does,My boyfriend Chris does my bff Danny does. Heat is just intense hornyness. Guys can go into it. FOOLS.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-77437614500831932432012-03-08T09:02:13.647-08:002012-03-08T09:02:13.647-08:00as i read this i could actually feel the pain...it...as i read this i could actually feel the pain...it was like i was IN the story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-29929935095734326682012-02-22T13:22:14.409-08:002012-02-22T13:22:14.409-08:00good job...i liled it a lot.good job...i liled it a lot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-34045814174187474042012-02-06T13:22:32.193-08:002012-02-06T13:22:32.193-08:00...This is a lemon...Of a anime....And animes are ......This is a lemon...Of a anime....And animes are just epic cartoons....And you say it's unrealistic? You sir, are growing up as a troll.VDangersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-43896666356142282012011-12-26T16:41:38.180-08:002011-12-26T16:41:38.180-08:00can you make one of these except for Sasuke? i lov...can you make one of these except for Sasuke? i love Sasuke and kibaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-11294242750245004582011-05-02T13:58:38.194-07:002011-05-02T13:58:38.194-07:00He just picked her up and carried her home naked?!...He just picked her up and carried her home naked?!<br /><br />And i love kiba and even in him being in 'heat' i dont think he should have raped someone, i love kiba and just the thought of him raping someone is dissapointingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-67256600567712882162011-04-20T15:30:46.627-07:002011-04-20T15:30:46.627-07:00It would have been more fun if the girl was liking...It would have been more fun if the girl was liking it that way, that she was rough too ^^Airinhttp://quizilla.teennick.com/my/profilenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-58901161644882798812011-04-11T13:26:21.052-07:002011-04-11T13:26:21.052-07:00your all nasty that was gross and awful considerin...your all nasty that was gross and awful considering i actually like kiba and would never be able to thing of such things and yet i don't even know why i read thisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-41335553109003414572011-03-29T17:29:36.466-07:002011-03-29T17:29:36.466-07:00Actually BOTH can go into heat, just it's kida...Actually BOTH can go into heat, just it's kida different for each other. ^w^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-15560462287779368332011-02-21T19:16:58.740-08:002011-02-21T19:16:58.740-08:00Uwaa great story~ Its sad that ge rape her though ...Uwaa great story~ Its sad that ge rape her though but I still loved it ^o^яιи(*゜Д゜*)https://www.blogger.com/profile/18387197885928671629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2235563662901236767.post-18915270032827449962011-01-05T16:42:27.111-08:002011-01-05T16:42:27.111-08:00That was a good story im really impressed even tho...That was a good story im really impressed even though ive read it before.... By the way im a little perverted so whenever i leave comments it might freak u out so look out for meAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com